hi this is my critiq:
1st of all u cant just have no background doesnt look ok
2nd of all i dont rly like the colors
3rd of all there are some black lines in the background u forgot 2 remove
4th of all this character needs some lens flare if u wanna make it look col i mean i understand u r trying to do action pose but trust me it needs some "incubeation time" if u know wat i mean
feel fre 2 resubmit and i can judge u again ok, dont be mad u can learn